Monday, 26 January 2015

Week 4

137 Kampung Batu Tiga ,
Jalan Segari ,
32200 Lumut ,
Perak Darul Ridzuan .

20 January 2015

Human Resource Manager ,
Jalan Hang Tuah ,
48500 Kuala Lumpur .

Dear Sir / Madam ,

APPLICATION FOR A JOB AS A COMPUTER TECHNICIAN

I would like to apply for a job as a computer technician in your company .

I am currently complete my training in Certificate In Computer Engineering ( Networking ) at Institut Kemahiran MARA Lumut . I have the skill in the troubleshooting computer , repairing computer and formatting computer .

I hope you can grant my wish to work at your company as a computer technician . I want to find an experience to work at your company and I also want to upgrade my skills as a computer technician .

Your Faithfully ,
Muhammad
( MOHAMMAD NAJRUL BIN MOHAMED FAUZI )
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15 comments:

  1. Unknown1 February 2015 at 04:49

    Good...

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  2. Unknown5 February 2015 at 04:00

    Your Faithfully must be change to Yours Faithfully ... good job muhd ☺

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  3. Unknown5 February 2015 at 07:37

    your grammar need improvement.. but for your level this is ok..you do nice najrul.. good luck baby...
    (Im Last)

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  4. Unknown8 February 2015 at 02:10

    if you want me to do you lc become high- speed just tell me...@@...please check you grammar..tq

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  5. Unknown8 February 2015 at 02:53

    Opening: Where did you get the information of an opening in the department??
    Content: Grammatical error "I have the skill in the" should be "I have the skills in" as you are referring to something. troubleshooting and repairing have the same meaning. if you want to make it a variety, try troubleshooting computers in terms of hardware and software.
    Closing: You did not mention about enclosing your resume and certs.
    Signature: no need for the brackets.
    Overall: Good, just need improvisations

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  6. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:27

    I think the mistake in this this letter is Your Faithfully should be changed to Yours Faithfully

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  7. repair phone pantai dalam kuala lumpur8 February 2015 at 03:31

    u must change Your Faitfully to Yours Faittfully

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  8. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:46

    I got nothing to say because everyone just say your error in the letter

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  9. Unknown8 February 2015 at 04:14

    your faithfully must be yours faithfully

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  10. norsalmina8 February 2015 at 05:51

    your name doesn`t have to put in bracket

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  11. intan_ahmad8 February 2015 at 05:59

    Good! but your name doesn't put in bracket.

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  12. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:50

    good muhd, just change your to yours

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  13. Unknown9 February 2015 at 04:13

    Najrul, you should include the name of company in your receiver's address. For your opening, you should mention where did you get to know about the vacancy. For your closing, kindly mention about your willingness to attend for the interview and do stress that you have attached your resume together with this letter. On the whole, good attempt!

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  14. Unknown10 February 2015 at 19:32

    please mention where you know the company..name of the company in your receiver

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  15. Unknown11 February 2015 at 08:57

    assalamualaikum mat...your letter is good but can you mention where you know the job is? but your letter look nice... keep going buddy :)

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